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a theiving princess

By zeldazoom
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Chapter 1: prologue

Hello my name is Midna twilightoth, I'm the princess of the twilight realm. About a year ago i helped a hero named Link destroy ganondorf, but i began to fall in love with him. One day...well that's kind of private(blush),the point is i learned i was pregnant and i didn't want Link all upset in finding her so i broke the twilight mirror. When she was born she was the spinning image of her father; round nose, dark blue eyes of a beast, and WOLF EARS! Although she did have red hair, blue twilight markings of a princess, and my bord sigh.



But even so i see Link every time i see her ,but that isn't why I'm giving her away, see a few days ago she began crying, so i went to check on her and i saw a black monster with poisonous stingers about to kill her. I tried to destroy it and when i did it bit me and blood poured out and the poison poured in. A Guard ran in and took me to the royal hospital to be treated, everyone thought i was dead. On what i thought would be my last minute i told my guards to bring my daughter to me so i could give her something.



when she came she was fussing because she was being held by someone other than me. I sat up and held her lovingly in my arms. I rubbed her wolf ears and smiled at her to make her easy, she knew something was wrong. Suddenly i felt a sharp pain in my heart, unbearable ,but the only thing running through my head was kentill must be with...link. The royal attendant came to my side,"my last wish is for Kentill..to...be...with..."i died before i could finish. But with her unexpected power she made me take another breath that followed by another and another...after she was taken outside the twilight realm"




where is she now?

the following takes place 9 years after the Link saved hyrule...

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Comments on this chapter

kentill(linksdaughter) says:

very promising,just need to be more descriptive.

Legends_awaiting says:

Capitalization would be nice. Also Gannondorf is Ganondorf.

hauu13 says:

Needs Capitals at the begining of sentences and sentences should be seperted from othe sentnces with a space. And you seriously need to check your spelling of words. If you use a program that has SpellCheck than use it!

kentill(linksdaughter) says:

yah you do need to spel words correctly,it takes the reader off the story.but dont get upset critisizum is to make your stories better!

kentill(linksdaughter) says:

hey zeldazoom,do me a favor and write a story called the three nintendo teers,i cant think of anything.i give you prommision!

zeldazoom says:

all right,illtry kentill,but i dont want to get in trouble for it...thanks!

kentill(linksdaughter) says:

your welcom and don't worry you wont as long as you put me in the credits!

kentill(linksdaughter) says:

oh yah,you dont really need to but capitals at the begging of sentances it doesn't take the reader out of the story so dont worry about it