Fan Fiction

Show,Don't Tell

By dragondemonangel
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Chapter 1: Prolouge

Zelda's out of the castle,coming of age at 18.She,Link and Mido live in a big house in Lake Hylia.Mido got exiled form the forest because of the Kokiri because he was too bossy. By some miracle,he didn't die when he left the forest. Link showed a heck of a whole lot of mercy(or pity)and allowed Mido to live with Zelda and himself.Saria still lives in Kokiri Forest. So...heres where it begins.

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Comments on this chapter

Koroks Rock says:

Go ahead and flesh it out a bit. You've described the premise of the story- tell it to us. Write a chapter that will show us what you just described.

Niko the ninja says:

Could use a bit of detail.

linkscopy says:

Mido is going to fall for Zelda isent he?

shieklord says:

put some spaces in between the commas