The Love of a Hero
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Chapter 1: Zelda, My Sweet
Link approached Zelda's door nervously. If I screw this up I'm never going to be able to forgive myself, he thought nevously. He took a deep breath and knocked on the door.
"Come in," said a voice, a voice like that of a goddess, a voice which had led him to fall in love with her. He entered the door and Zelda cried out. "Link!"
She rushed up and gave him a hug, and then a passionate kiss on the lips. "Has it really bee nine years? Has it been that long?" She asked when they parted.
"Yeah, it has." admitted Link, somewhat embarrassed by his long absense.
"You know, that means that you're nineteen now, and I'm twenty. We're old enough," Zelda hinted.
What the Din did she mean by that? thought Link, confused.
She answered him soon enough by ripping off his tunic and giving him another kiss. Within moments Link found himself undress her as she did the same to him.
"Time to get back all those years we lost," gasped Zelda, ready for the time of her life.
Little did either of them know that time could well be the last they would ever have together...
Admin's Note: This chapter has been divided into two halves, for the purpose of clarity. The first is an edit version of the chapter, which you just read, and the second is the original. Within the next week, if I obtain permission from the original author, we'll arrive at a single, finished version.
As Link approched Zelda's door he was nervous. " If I screw this up I'm never going to forgive my self" he said. He knocked on the door, " Come in" said a voice, that voice of a goddess is one of the reasons he fell in love with her. He entered the door and Zelda creid out. " Link" she hugged him and gave him a passionate kiss on the lips. Those lips he thouogt to himself so warm and tender. " Has it really been 9 long years" she said " Yes it has", " then you are 19 And I am 20 we are old enough" she said. What the hell did she mean by that Link thougt. She grabbed his tunic and ripped it off while kissing him. Link undressed Zelda while she did the same to Link. " It's time to regain what we lost all these years" she said, both having the time of their lives. Which they found out could almost be thier last time together.... TO BE CONTINUED
"Come in," said a voice, a voice like that of a goddess, a voice which had led him to fall in love with her. He entered the door and Zelda cried out. "Link!"
She rushed up and gave him a hug, and then a passionate kiss on the lips. "Has it really bee nine years? Has it been that long?" She asked when they parted.
"Yeah, it has." admitted Link, somewhat embarrassed by his long absense.
"You know, that means that you're nineteen now, and I'm twenty. We're old enough," Zelda hinted.
What the Din did she mean by that? thought Link, confused.
She answered him soon enough by ripping off his tunic and giving him another kiss. Within moments Link found himself undress her as she did the same to him.
"Time to get back all those years we lost," gasped Zelda, ready for the time of her life.
Little did either of them know that time could well be the last they would ever have together...
Admin's Note: This chapter has been divided into two halves, for the purpose of clarity. The first is an edit version of the chapter, which you just read, and the second is the original. Within the next week, if I obtain permission from the original author, we'll arrive at a single, finished version.
As Link approched Zelda's door he was nervous. " If I screw this up I'm never going to forgive my self" he said. He knocked on the door, " Come in" said a voice, that voice of a goddess is one of the reasons he fell in love with her. He entered the door and Zelda creid out. " Link" she hugged him and gave him a passionate kiss on the lips. Those lips he thouogt to himself so warm and tender. " Has it really been 9 long years" she said " Yes it has", " then you are 19 And I am 20 we are old enough" she said. What the hell did she mean by that Link thougt. She grabbed his tunic and ripped it off while kissing him. Link undressed Zelda while she did the same to Link. " It's time to regain what we lost all these years" she said, both having the time of their lives. Which they found out could almost be thier last time together.... TO BE CONTINUED
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Comments on this chapter
Koroks Rock says:
I like that word, erk. It could mean a great number of things, depending on the context. In ths particular case, it means "Oh dear, I've got to cough up a lecture of sorts."
There's noting wrong with writing romance or even writing about "making of babies". People do that, it's a natural part of life and therefore literature. So, I'm not lecturing about Link and Zelda making up lost years in such an abrupt fashion (though you should have slowed that whole scene down... not to be insulting or anything, but it just doesn't happen like that. sorry if I'm smashing anyone's dreams here, but as an adult, i feel i should just clear that up...)
No, the problem is the absolutely abysmal formatting. This story is barely readable. I ended up just dropping it into notepad and rewriting it for you, so you'll know what it's supposed to look like. Please please please write cleaner, lengthier chapters. Use Word's grammar checking feature if you want to, but please, just don't submit such a klutzy chapter again, unless you ask me to help you rewrite it (which i will be glad to do.)
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