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a theiving princess

By zeldazoom
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Chapter 3: the golden sword

when i opened my eyes everything was blury.i touched my neck to see my mirror shard but it wasn't there.i sat up from the bed and looked around for it,but everything was still a blure.i closed my eyes tight and got out of bed,i opened them again.the blure was depleating but i still couldn't see enough.i walked slowly holding on to the wall as i got by,suddenly i noticed my ears were that of a wolf's!my birthmark were all over me now and my teeth grew sharp,i have to find that mirror!




instead of walking i was running,then i hit the wall.owch.i heard footsteps behind me and tried to run away but for some reason i couldn't move,i couldn't yell or scream for help.the footsteps grew closer and louder,i knew they belonged to someone i wanted to stay away from.suddenly the footsteps stopped,touched me, and talked,"Kentill!get up,its time to leave now,the whole market town is burning!get up,GET UP!"



i jumped and noticed the wood wall and door of Telma's bar going away , drentched in fire.i was being carried away by someone who wore green,my head rested on his shoulder.i touched my neck to grab my mirror for comfort but it wasn't there.i wiggled myself free from the dude and ran back inside for my mirror.the man chased after me saying its broken.i went threw the flames and on the floor where all the mirror shards were left.i reached out my left hand and said,"midna".the mirror shard fixed its self and was back around my neck.i saw the man run in and start choking,i realized i couldn't breath the smoke either.i crouched on the floor and crowled my way out,dragging the man with me.when we got out my arms were on fire and my legs were cut.i put two fingers on the fire and squezzed them together,it really hurt but i didn't want to let him know.




the rest of the buildings were on fire as well so we had to get out of here fast.we climbed the stairs and ran down the narrow passage.but suddenly a plank of burning wood swooped down and blocked our way.we turned around to go through the back gate but waiting for us was moblins!the desision was extremly tough,get killed by the monsters of be obliterated by fire.The dude made a dash at the monsters but got thrown back.



he got up and tried again,same thing happened.The moblinns drew nearer,my death was becoming clear and Link was being beat up badly by the surprisingly strong monsters.i finally got fed up with this and grabbed link's hand,his triforce zapped to me.i held out my hand and with the power of twilight and light i killed them all in one blast.just as we were about to leave more than a trillion stormed in and surounded us from all derections.Link was trampled on and was being eaten alive and i was left to defend for myself! the moblins swarmed me and began biting,a feeling unbearible.i stopped struggling,my end was...coming.even with the triforce i was powerless.



suddenly right before i was about to pass out a splash of light enveloped my left hand,all the monsters stopped to see what was going on,even the ones attacking Link.the light turned into an orange sword with a triforce keychain hanging from it.now..."come get me,a**h***s!"i yelled


100 by 100 i slaughtered them all,none were left standing when i was done...i felt a sence of thrill running down my vains.they were all desintigrated and Link was wide mouthed.before i was so scared but now i was so exited,thrilled even.the sword went away but i didn't care,we ran out the gate door and were in Hyrule~feild.the ground was so soft on my bare feet,the sky was twilight,i was a different person.i couldn't get why but i was,with that sword's power.
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~somewhere in the dark realm~


"what do you mean you lost her?she is only 8 years old!"


"yes but master,she has obtained the sol sword of the triforce!"


"WHAT?!THAT WOULD HAVE TO MEAN SHE STOLE THE TRIFORCE OF COURAGE!BUT THATS IMPOSSIBLE SINCE YOU KILLED THE HERO AND SENT THE TRIFORCE TO KYOKO,RIGHT!"


"yes,well about that sir,i-"



"IMBECELL!!!!SEND KOTCHAKI-MISOMO AFTER HER THAN!OR ITS OFF WITH...YOUR FAMILY'S HEADS!"

THE END!


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Comments on this chapter

hauu13 says:

Um... Why is this chapter in first person when the second one was in third person? And why was the second chapter in third person when the first one was in first person? I mean, whatever viewpoint you use in your first chapter you need to stick with for the whole story. And you really need to start using commas, you have WAY too many periods. Your spelling is terrible, and YOU NEED TO CAPITILIZE THE BEGINNINGS OF SENTENCES. Please, do these things in the next chapter, reading this is giving me a head-ache as it is...

kentill(linksdaughter) says:

dude lighten up!i mean let this person do what ever dialog he/she wants it fine and the capitalization is for losers!and nerds...jk,but its not nicessary

hauu13 says:

First of all, I'm not being mean (at least, not trying to be). I'm just trying to help this girl/boy/androgenous person become a little bit better at writing. And I'm a bit of a Grammar Nazi, so I can take bad grammar very seriously... But if Zelda Zoom wants me to stop then I will... And I'm sorry if you take my editing the wrong way, I don't know if what I type can offend someone (I'm an emotionless freak)... And secondly, the cake is a lie...

kentill(linksdaughter) says:

im sorry if you took my comment wrong i was just playing,i just like when people get creative...like zelda zoom!:l:smile.giftongue.gif.s what do you mean by the cake is a lie???

kentill(linksdaughter) says:

anyway this chapter seems a lot like the sword in my story!!!!

kentill(linksdaughter) says:

copy cat l;lol.gif

kentill(linksdaughter) says:

you know ive been thinking,maby zeldazoom put it first person becouse its a dreamsequence ,right zeldazoom?!

kentill(linksdaughter) says:

oh yeah and nice touch with saying a**h***,lmao l;lol.gif

hauu13 says:

Creative? But there aren't any explosions or pyromaniacs in this story... Creative is a bunch of people obssesed with fire in my opinion. And the cake is a lie. Real famous line from Portal or some other game, that I really like...

kentill(linksdaughter) says:

creative is doing something different from someone else,or most people.