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“evil” princess

By zeldazoom
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Chapter 2: A wolfos brother

Ganondorf,King Of Evil,laughed and ominous booming laughter. He leaned forward and looked the boy in the eyes from afar. The boy,despite the eerie feeling running down his back,stared at him seriously. The evilest thing in the world smile a horrible,awful smile. The boy gulped and clutched his black pants and silver chain. Yes,he was very scared,but he wasn't going to let him hurt his sister,or anyone else.




"Let kyoko go!"He yelled after things had grown silent for a while. Ganondorf smirked. Then he got up from his elabrate red chair. He walked down the red carpet,his large feet hitting the floor dramaticly. Chills sprang up the young goth boy's skinny back. He was now face to face with the incarnation of darkness himself.




"no."





That wasn't the answer he wanted to hear,and now it was time to take what he wanted by force. He reached to his back,secretly holding a sheath and sword, and pulled out a thin,long,sand colored blade.The kind brother swong it out to the side,the sign for battle. Ganon just laughed at the brave boy and lifted his long arm. Magic shot out from it and electricuted the black haired boy to the floor. He got up and grabbed his sword...well tried to. When he tried to he couldn't grasp it. He had a paw,and not just a paw,a full wolfos body! The only difference was his red dyed hair on the top.





"there. you see now that nice guys finish last. You dont have that instinct to kill,that is why your not my son."Ganondorf said plainly.




"like id ever want to be your son,you evil bastard!"The kid wolfos yelled.





Ganondorf kicked him. The wolfos howled in pain and tried to run out of there. Ganondorf let him,he wouldn't get far with the hero around...


Comments on this chapter

kudjiboy says:

There should be a space after the commas, and one space after each paragraph.

Like so. It makes the whole story look much cleaner, and more enjoyable to read, okay?

123456789zelda_n_n says:

dumb

kentill(linksdaughter) says:

what kudjiboy said. also 123456789_n_n is full of it. this aa great story!this chapter made me hungry too.(why does eveything make me hungry?)