Inu in Clocktown
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Chapter 1: On the Way There
InuYasha, Kagome, Miroku, and Songo popped out of the well.
"Hmm....I thought we were supposed to be in the feudal era." Kagome said.
"Ya, how did we end up here?" Songo asked.
"Wait were are we?" InuYahsa asked.
They walked a little farther, and came to a sign. "We appear to be at... Termina fields." Miroku said.
Soon, a young man wearing a green tunic and a pair of brown boots rode by on a dark brown horse. "Yo, kid, where is the nearest town?" Inuyasha asked.
"Its that way" the boy answered while pointing north. "And I’m not a kid I’m nearly eighteen."
"Ya, Ya..." Inuyasha said, annoyed.
"Maybe I should lead you there," the boy said.
"That would be great! Thank you." Kagome said.
They had only followed the boy for 2 minutes until the boy said, "By the way, my name is Link."
Kagome replied, "This is Inuyasha, Song, Miroku and I am Kagome."
"Well, here we are!" Link said with a smile, they came to a big door.
"And where are we?" Inuyasha asked.
"Clock town." Link answered.
"Hmm....I thought we were supposed to be in the feudal era." Kagome said.
"Ya, how did we end up here?" Songo asked.
"Wait were are we?" InuYahsa asked.
They walked a little farther, and came to a sign. "We appear to be at... Termina fields." Miroku said.
Soon, a young man wearing a green tunic and a pair of brown boots rode by on a dark brown horse. "Yo, kid, where is the nearest town?" Inuyasha asked.
"Its that way" the boy answered while pointing north. "And I’m not a kid I’m nearly eighteen."
"Ya, Ya..." Inuyasha said, annoyed.
"Maybe I should lead you there," the boy said.
"That would be great! Thank you." Kagome said.
They had only followed the boy for 2 minutes until the boy said, "By the way, my name is Link."
Kagome replied, "This is Inuyasha, Song, Miroku and I am Kagome."
"Well, here we are!" Link said with a smile, they came to a big door.
"And where are we?" Inuyasha asked.
"Clock town." Link answered.
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- Chapter 1: On the Way There
- Chapter 2: A tour of Clocktown
- Chapter 3: Where'd she go?
- Chapter 4: Catching the Bombers
- Chapter 5: Termina Fields
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Comments on this chapter
Koroks Rock says:
-Whenever someone speaks, they get their own paragraph.
-The beginning of each sentence has a capital letter, and sentences are seperated with spaces.
-Sentences end with periods, while ideas are seperated with commas.
-Where and while both have a H in them, and Termina is not spelled Termania.
-And finally, people don't speak in numbers, we use words- when you write a stroy you spell eighteen out, not just type 18.
Basically, you're going to have to proofread your next fic for second grade errors. I hate to be mean, but this was an embarrassment.
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