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Welcome to High School

By dragondemonangel
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Chapter 5: Misson Accomplished

"Darunia, please try not to get hit a lot here?I don't got the money for a doctor's or a hospital bill." Link asked, walking into the mall.

Zelda ran into the nearest store. She hid behind some clothes as he passed. Ruto came in behind her, shaking her a little.

"You're never gonna do the dare like this, Zelda." she told her, "Why don't you just give up on it?". Zelda shook her head.

"I'll do it, just give me time..." she said. Ruto nodded and they started shopping in the store they were in.

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Link thought he heard a muffled shriek, but shrugged it off. He walked into the theater area and looked around at the movies. Nothing that good. He paid for The Seed of Chucky and went to shop until the movie came on.

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Zelda and Ruto went shopping,ate,pretty much did their own thing . Zelda still was thinking of a good way to do the dare...to kiss Link.

'Maybe...I can pretend to fall or something...? Yeah, that'll do.' Zelda thought.

It still felt weird to call it a kiss and with Link! Zelda put on a determined face and decided to put her plan in to action. She told Ruto where she was going and what she was going to do.

After Zelda told her, Ruto grinned and said,"This I gotta see."and stayed far back enough away from where Ruto was going so that she looked inconspicuous, but so that she could still see what was going on.

Zelda found Link not far from the Food Court and waited until he was near. "Hi, Link." Zelda said,smiling.

Link looked up. "Oh, hi." he said.

She started walking towards him, but stumbled "accidently" and Link caught her.

Zelda bent up and leaned towards him.
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'What is she doing? I'm not complaining, but still...this isn't like her...'Link thought,confused.

"What?" he asked. Just a second before she did it, he figured it out when she went closer to him.

'Oh my Go--', His thoughts were interrupted by a sudden lips on his.

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Zelda went in for the kill as she drew nearer. She pressed her lips against his,and the world seemed to stop. Nothing but the warmth of his lips ment anything, and she melted into his kiss. Zelda got a real surprise as he responded, and he bit her bottom lip, and licked her lips, asking for entrence, which she joyously gave.

It seemed in eternity after they parted, and Link said nothing. He ran away into the movie theatre and didn't look back.
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Ruto smirked as she saw what happened.

"About time,wouldn't you say?"came Darunia's voice from behind her and she jumped, startled.

The girl snorted and said, "Took them long enough.I could tell they liked each other since the beginning."

"So did I,but I better go see if he's OK." Darunia agreed and went off to the movie theater.


Comments on this chapter

Koroks Rock says:

No need to submit the chapter four times, just be patient.

Also, your punctuation is wonky. Put a space after commas, periods, semicolons, colons, hyphens, quotes, exclamation marks, question marks, etc. Exceptions are trunactions (it is becoming it's), and punctuation marks being side by side (periods and commas inside quotes, but outside parentheses, etc).

LinksLove says:

lol! Nice!

star_breaker says:

Wow! You really went into detail during "The Kiss." Very nice! I love this story.