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The Five Links

By Princess of Twilight
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Chapter 13: Rejection!

Sorry about the short length of this chapter...^^U I promise the next chapter will be longer than this one for those of you who like longer chapters...^^U

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Just outside the castle's outer gate, Tetra and her crew gathered to see Link and the others off before they began the rescue mission to save their friend, Vio...


"Well, I think my ship will be all repaired by nightfall. Then, it's back to the sea for us!"

"It's a shame you have to leave so soon...I wish you could've stayed longer sis, there's so much we still need to talk about. Your visit was so short," Zelda whined.

"Look, this isn't goodbye forever.", Tetra smiled as she put her arm on her little sister's shoulder. Zelda nodded.

"You're right, I'm sure our paths will cross again.", Zelda returned Tetra's smile with her own. And then the two sisters hugged. Tetra then walked over to Link and the others.

"Well, I guess this is goodbye for now since you all have to go save your friend...", Tetra stated. " Goodbye Link, Red, and Midna." She hugged them all, and began to head back to he castle until her ship was repaired.

"Goodbye Tetra-san!", Red cheered as he waved farewell. Blue began to grow angry. He then began to chase after Tetra until he caught up to her.

"What?! No goodbye hug for me? No farewell kiss?". Blue smirked. Tetra turned around to face him.

"Well, after last night...no.", Tetra replied with a smirk on her face. Blue laughed.

"C'mon Tetra, just one kiss?", Blue smiled. "You know you want to..."

"So, you still want me to kiss you?", Tetra asked.

"Hell yeah!", Blue stated with another smirk.

"Then close your eyes....", Tetra stated softly. Blue closed his eyes, put his hands on her shoulders, while Tetra stood up so her face was level with his. And.....






.....she slapped him.

Green, Midna, Zelda, and Red; and Tetra's entire crew, burst into a fit of laughter. Blue's cheek was bright pink, and it had the mark of Tetra's hand on it.

"Wh-hat the hell was that for!?", Blue asked angrily as he placed his hand on his tender cheek, and glared at her.

"I told you I wouldn't kiss you last night, and I meant it. So consider that your 'farewell gift'.", Tetra laughed as she, and her crew, began to walk towards the castle again. Blue turned around and walked over to the others.


"Smooth Blue.", Green snickered.

"Oh shut up Link!", Blue yelled back.

"I'll try too...", Green stated while trying to hold back laughter.

"She's just playing hard to get.", Blue stated firmly.

"Right...:, Green agreed sarcastically.

"Well, if you guys are all done; it's time we go save Vio! I hope they didn't do anything bad to him...", Midna stated with a hint of uneasiness in her voice . The others all nodded, and they began to head towards the entrance to the Dark World...little did they know...they were already too late...


Comments on this chapter

Shadow-chan says:

Lol! Rejection Blue!

hauu13 says:

Oh, Blue got b*tch slapped!
Grammar fixing stuff:
In one of your sentences you said "Blue began to grow angered" when it should have been "Blue began to grow angry". Angered is a past tense and should be used when you're saying someone is getting angry. The proper way to use angered is "this angered Blue" and so-on-and-so-forth. And you keep adding commas to the end of dialogue outside of the qoutations marks, which isn't correct. For example, "'Your visit was so short...", Zelda whined.'" Should be put as "Your visit was so short," Zelda whined. If you have dialogue in a sentence and you still continue the sentence after the dialogue is finished you can't put ANY periods in said dialogue. Yes, that's it. Hope that helps!

Link_Rules_All says:

verra good lass. verra good indeed.

Princess of Twilight says:

Thanks eveyone!

Last Modified: Feb 11 2009