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Critical Point

By Celestial Reign
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Shadow-chan says:

This story, is just damn well written! I give you huge kudos, even though Link is getting tortured, you expressed the seriousness going on. This story is absolutely awesome. Keep up the great work!

kentill(linksdaughter) says:

(audience applause) Nice work

Legends_awaiting says:

And I thought I was the only one that had an idea that Dark Link should capture Link (but I choose the TP one... xD)and torture him. And the way they are torturing Link a crap lot worse than the torturing ideas I have in mind. o.o

Excellent. Pure Excellence!

Celestial Reign says:

Thank you!

Flamewolf says:

*applause* Awesome! XD I love it! Much more torture than I could've thought of o.o But I still love it ;3

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