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Modern Love

By linksgirl
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Chapter 1: Life stinks....

Sonata slumped as she walked out of her Gym class. Something was bothering her.Her best friend, Suki ran after her down the hallway.
"Hey" Suki said panting. "You know, you could have waited for me!" He said to Sonata, still panting.
Sonata looked at him while rolling her eyes, "Sorry, didn't know you'd be that angry!" she just laughed and walked with Suki down the hallway.
"Man! those dodgeballs look so soft but then you get hit and BAM! They hurt like heck!" Suki said rubbing his right arm, "I got hit on my right arm twice......"
"Thats why its called dodgeball! Not Get-hit-as-much-as-you-can-ball!" Sonata laughed.
Suki laughed along with her as they walked down the school hallway.

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Comments on this chapter

Koroks Rock says:

Very short, but it does offer some characterization, and sets the setting and mood in a rudimentary fashion. I hope to get a nice, long chapter from yu soon l;n_n.gif

firehexer says:

Short short SHORT!
Not bad but really too short! l;0_o.gif

linksgirl says:

thanks! i think i should have made it longer, but im too busy! l;dizzy.gif

firehexer says:

Bah, it's not a drama!
Continue at your rythm.

linkscopy says:

Wow linksgirl, this is a awsome story! happy.gif

linkscopy says:

Oh! and how the heck did you get thouse Link faces?

Koroks Rock says:

If you look in the lefthand sidebar you'll find a category entitled "Multimedia" and at the bottom of that is "Emoticons". Just open that up to learn about our nifty collection of emoticons

linkscopy says:

Thancks a lot Koroks Rock!!

star_breaker says:

Nice chapter, but very short. Hope to see lengthier stuff in future. Good start!