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The Stalfos Story

By Prince_Ganon
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Chapter 1: The boy who wandered into the woods.

It was a rainy night for Stalfos. Stalfos was a Kokiri with dark green eyes and thick, long, black hair.

"See Stalfos, every time you come outside it rains," the great Mido shouted.

"Like I give a care," Stalfos responded. "All I care about is making a friend."

"Fine if you want a FRIEND. Make yourself useful and go get some food from the LOST WOODS WHERE YOU BELONG!" Mido shouted.

"FINE, MABYE I WILL." So Stalfos travelled into the lost woods. He walked deeper and deeper into the forest and the night got darker.

Sure is cold, he thought. He went still deeper in the woods, but he came to a stop when he heard a disturbing noise. An evil laugh rose up and beyond the trees rose Koume and Kotake.
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Comments on this chapter

Koroks Rock says:

I made a few small fixes to get the lines spaced out and correct small grammar mistakes, nothing big. An interesting start to your story.

Prince_Ganon says:

Thanks! Cows are Fake.

Anime James says:

If there were a story to crit on, I'd do it. But there isn't. Just a kid who gets shouted at and Koume and Kotake laughing. This had better get better.

Prince_Ganon says:

What does crit mean? I can't tell if it gets better. How am I supposed to know? It all depends on the readers opinion.

Koroks Rock says:

QUOTE(Prince_Ganon @ Dec 31 2005, 02:40 AM)
What does crit mean?



Criticize. In case you need a definition, the process of offering well-reasoned opinions about the work of others with the intention of helping the recipient

star_breaker says:

Um... no offence, but this is a bit boring and confusing... here i shall quoote: a little less conversation, a little more action, please!

ganon rulez says:

kool it must be hard trying to make a horror STORY i mean you cant make people scared by story so this will probably be quite good.