not bad, i felt you could hav slowed down the story a bit but other than that, amazing story! Oh, yah kentill updated her story... zeldaman keeps being a harsh cridict you've ever seen(i read your comment, lol)!
That sword shall shine in the darkness, casting back evil... With it in your hands, none can keep you from rescuing your sister!" -The King of Red Lions The Wind Waker Show All Quotes Submit Quote
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