not bad, i felt you could hav slowed down the story a bit but other than that, amazing story! Oh, yah kentill updated her story... zeldaman keeps being a harsh cridict you've ever seen(i read your comment, lol)!
"All the tragedy that has befallen Hyrule was my doing... I was so young...I could not comprehend the consequences of trying to control the Sacred Realm."
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